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She offered me her honor

So I honored her offer

And all night long

I was on her and off her

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QUOTE (Daylin @ Dec 8 2006, 08:34 AM)
QUOTE (what went wrong? @ Dec 8 2006, 04:49 AM)
Inspired by Rush [sometimes it's kind of obvious]:

I fly on wings of broken dreams
my wings are mine alone
I'm going to spacescapes unknown
beyond the faintest sunbeams

You are enveloped in my wings
Hidden in this safe place
We're lifted by unpressured grace
As two, a whole, we cling

We've made it to a new home
Where we can just be free
No longer under lock and key
And so close to the ocean's foam

I fly on wings of mended dreams
And I'm saved by a dove
A gift of purest love
I've given up to our schemes

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QUOTE (-D-RocK- @ Dec 13 2006, 05:34 PM)
She offered me her honor
So I honored her offer
And all night long
I was on her and off her

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I have one.... but I will have to edit this post to actually get it... hold on one sec...

 

ah ha. Okay, I wrote it and made it an image to put on my desktop because I loved it. I did write it by the way, it was for a school project that was just for 'ha-ha's'. Tell me if you like it or not. biggrin.gif

 

 

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QUOTE (Retrospective @ Dec 28 2006, 02:45 PM)
I have one.... but I will have to edit this post to actually get it... hold on one sec...

ah ha. Okay, I wrote it and made it an image to put on my desktop because I loved it. I did write it by the way, it was for a school project that was just for 'ha-ha's'. Tell me if you like it or not. biggrin.gif


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QUOTE (Retrospective @ Dec 28 2006, 02:45 PM)
I have one.... but I will have to edit this post to actually get it... hold on one sec...

ah ha. Okay, I wrote it and made it an image to put on my desktop because I loved it. I did write it by the way, it was for a school project that was just for 'ha-ha's'. Tell me if you like it or not. biggrin.gif


http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e195/Rush_Fan22/TenLittleRushFans.jpg

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QUOTE (sundog @ Jan 5 2007, 07:26 PM)
QUOTE (Retrospective @ Dec 28 2006, 02:45 PM)
I have one.... but I will have to edit this post to actually get it... hold on one sec...

ah ha. Okay, I wrote it and made it an image to put on my desktop because I loved it. I did write it by the way, it was for a school project that was just for 'ha-ha's'. Tell me if you like it or not. biggrin.gif


http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e195/Rush_Fan22/TenLittleRushFans.jpg

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You told me

 

 

You told me not to care

and I don't

 

You told me no arguments

and I won't

 

You told me to forget

and I did

 

You told me to be strong

and I am

 

You told me to move on

and I will

 

You told me to remember

but I can't

 

Yet -

I tell you nothing.

 

 

 

-B. Lee

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QUOTE (barney_rebel @ Feb 7 2007, 10:49 PM)
You told me


You told me not to care
and I don't

You told me no arguments
and I won't

You told me to forget
and I did

You told me to be strong
and I am

You told me to move on
and I will

You told me to remember
but I can't

Yet -
I tell you nothing.



-B. Lee

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QUOTE (Daylin @ Feb 8 2007, 11:13 AM)
QUOTE (barney_rebel @ Feb 7 2007, 10:49 PM)
You told me


You told me not to care
and I don't

You told me no arguments
and I won't

You told me to forget
and I did

You told me to be strong
and I am

You told me to move on
and I will

You told me to remember
but I can't

Yet -
I tell you nothing.



-B. Lee

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Who do we turn to?

 

 

My health...

I turn to doctors

 

My knowledge...

I turn to professors

 

My loneliness...

I turn to companionship

 

My sanity...

I turn to substances

 

My faith...

I turn to the Lord

 

My surrender...

I turn to suicide

 

My decision...

I turn to myself

 

 

-B. Lee

 

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Ryan

 

 

Our lives changed so soon,

that winter afternoon

 

Arrived home and there were three:

Theresa, Ryan and me

 

On awake time you start to cry,

Tucked in the crib you where you lie

 

Cries lasting a short while,

Picked you up for that morning smile

 

And the talk of how you've grown

A reflection of love we've shown

 

Focused my camera for that shot,

Treasured moments that we've caught

 

Freeze this moment and save the time,

Won't be long until school-bells chime

 

 

-B Lee

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the eagle is a bird

that is very big and neat

he has razor sharp claws

on his big yellow feet

 

sometimes they have white heads

sometimes they are brown

but the eagle has a happy life

and will never wear a frown

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QUOTE (daveyt @ Apr 1 2007, 10:03 AM)
the eagle is a bird
that is very big and neat
he has razor sharp claws
on his big yellow feet

sometimes they have white heads
sometimes they are brown
but the eagle has a happy life
and will never wear a frown

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Did you write this?

 

 

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QUOTE (Necromancer @ Apr 1 2007, 08:09 AM)
QUOTE (daveyt @ Apr 1 2007, 10:03 AM)
the eagle is a bird
that is very big and neat
he has razor sharp claws
on his big yellow feet

sometimes they have white heads
sometimes they are brown
but the eagle has a happy life
and will never wear a frown

ohmy.gif

 

Did you write this?

 

 

Eagles ROCK!!! yes.gif

tongue.gif i wrote that in 3rd grade with some help from my older brother. i got stuck on the second part and he helped me out with the opening line there. nice one bro!

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Love is a Myth

 

Love is a myth

Told by strangers

Love is a myth

On radio

Love is a myth

Hidden danger

Love is a myth

On video

 

You think you haven't found it yet

Your ideals haven't been met

But the answers

That elude you

That will fool you

Are all so unreal

 

Should I say goodnight?

Should I say goodnight?

 

 

Love is a myth

In a kiss

Love is a myth

And fantasy

Love is a myth

can't resist it

Love is a myth

On your TV

 

The real thing is lying near

The real thing is crying here

But the answers

That will cool you

That will soothe you

Are all in a dream

 

Should I say goodbye?

Should I say goodbye?

 

 

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A lot of great poems here. I just love writing poetry, but unfortunately these days it seems I'm in a rut. sad.gif So I'll go back in time and let you read some of my older stuff.

 

Dream Time

 

Days are long and spent carrying dreams of nights to come

Linking stars on a string of bright silver silk one by one

Stretching from one end of the Milky Way to the other

I only want to pick them up and give them all to you

But their cold light reminds me of too many hours of darkness

Consumed in a cold dark sky barely touched by a sliver of the moon

And my arms cannot carry the load anymore

So I let them fall, like shooting stars

Hoping in my lonely heart that you will catch at least one of them

And recognize it as a gift intended for you

But as the sky does not belong to me

And as your steps only drive you further away from me

I despair to see you in the early morning mist

Holding a blinding light in your open hands

 

FMJL/2004-01-26

 

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I wouldn't ever post anything I've written on a forum like this... not that I enjoy, I've never really been a fan of anything I've written, but yeah... plagiarism is rampant... especially on the intronets machine.

 

But yeah, I'd be interested in PMing works back and forth with anybody that wanted to... PM me if you're interested.

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