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Neil is human, and not all his lyrics are great. Since the thread of least favorite songs had pretty good responses, I'm curious to see what the reactions to this post are going to be.

 

One of Neil's strengths is his ability to play with words. And weave new concepts out of sterile terms. Sometimes it backfires and flops.

 

A quality of justice

A quantity of light

A particle of mercy

Makes the color of right

 

Dog years - It's the season of the itch

Dog years - With every scratch it reappears

Dog years - For every sad son of a bitch

Dog years - With his tail between his ears

 

Net boy, net girl

Send your impulse 'round the world

Put your message in a modem

And throw it in the Cyber Sea

 

Stay! Go!

Work! No!

Learn! Live!

Earn! Give!

Stay or fight? What's right?

Listen!

 

FACE UP - Or you can only back down

FACE UP - Hit the target, or you better hit the ground

FACE UP - There's still time to turn the game around

FACE UP - Turn it up -

Or turn that wild card down

Turn it up

 

Don't complain

Don't explain

I don't think my new resolve

Can stand the strain

 

SNAP!

Hide in your shell, let the world go to hell

It's like Russian roulette to you

SNAP!

Sweat running cold, you can't face growing old

It's a personal threat to you

SNAP!

The world is a cage for your impotent rage

But don't let it get to you

SNAP!

 

Truth is false and logic lost

Now the fourth dimension is crossed

 

One, two, three -

Add without subtraction

Sound on sound

Multiplied reaction

H to O

No flow without the other

 

He's got a force field and a flexible plan

He's got a date with fate in a black sedan

He plays fast forward for as long as he can

But he won't need a bed -

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I don't have any problem with people criticizing Neil's lyrics but with so many songs it's a little unfair to expect everything to be universally considered great. He's written so much that's astonishingly good that some ordinary lyrics suffer by comparison. Think about this for a moment, I'm a huge Van Halen fan, but these are the lyrics they came up with for one of those three relatively new songs they made three years ago. These are what most rock lyrics are:

 

"Well!

She treat me like a personal Jesus

Got the hand...put it where its gonna heal ya

Got the finger...put it right there on the trigger

Well, pump it up, pump it up

Baby make it bigger

 

Well... Im Going crazy

Pumping it up, pumping it up

(ewww ohhh ya)

It's gonna heal ya

 

She put the cream in my coffee

(first thing in the morning)

Put that butter on my biscuit (honeydew my melons)

Cherries on bananas (gonna need a second helpin')

You know I'm up for breakfast so early in the morning

 

Lock the front ...Leave the back door open

Hot tub loosen up ...baby been soaking

Been tokin'...been sippin'

Slip slide slippin ... all got me tripping

 

Well... Im Going crazy

Keeping it up... pumping it up, pumping it up

Aint gonna kill ya

 

She put the cream in my coffee

(first thing in the morning)

Spread that butter on my biscuit (honeydew my melon)

Put berries on bananas (I need a second helping)

That's why I'm up for breakfast so early in the morning

 

Wake me up babe

Hold me up, wake me up... Gotta get

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up, gotta get up, gotta get up,

gotta get up.

 

[ GUITAR SOLO ]

 

She put the cream in my coffee

(first thing in the morning)

Spread hot butter on my biscuit (honeydew my melon)

Like them cherries on bananas

(gonna need a second helping)

Thats why I'm up for breakfast so early in the morning

 

Got bacon on the table (first thing in the morning)

Squeeze some honey on my biscuit (honeydew my melon)

Spread some cream on my bananas (I

need a second helping)

You know I'm up for breakfast so early in the mornin'

Hot sweet sticky

Get it up, get it up, get it up

 

Wake me up babe

Wake me up babe

Lift me up baby

Gotta get up, Gotta get up

Hot coffee first thing in the morningGotta get up"

 

Imagine Neil writing these and all of a sudden everything you listed looks like Shakespeare.

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QUOTE (snowdog2112 @ Oct 11 2007, 09:01 PM)
Imagine Neil writing these and all of a sudden everything you listed looks like Shakespeare.

True! Even Neil's worst lyrics say more than your typical Cock Rocker band. But...

 

I see red

It hurts my head

Couldn't we talk about something else instead?

 

Sounds like the poem of an 8th grader.

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QUOTE (psionic11 @ Oct 11 2007, 09:47 PM)
Neil is human, and not all his lyrics are great. Since the thread of least favorite songs had pretty good responses, I'm curious to see what the reactions to this post are going to be.

One of Neil's strengths is his ability to play with words. And weave new concepts out of sterile terms. Sometimes it backfires and flops.

A quality of justice
A quantity of light
A particle of mercy
Makes the color of right

Dog years - It's the season of the itch
Dog years - With every scratch it reappears
Dog years - For every sad son of a bitch
Dog years - With his tail between his ears

Net boy, net girl
Send your impulse 'round the world
Put your message in a modem
And throw it in the Cyber Sea

Stay! Go!
Work! No!
Learn! Live!
Earn! Give!
Stay or fight? What's right?
Listen!

FACE UP - Or you can only back down
FACE UP - Hit the target, or you better hit the ground
FACE UP - There's still time to turn the game around
FACE UP - Turn it up -
Or turn that wild card down
Turn it up

Don't complain
Don't explain
I don't think my new resolve
Can stand the strain

SNAP!
Hide in your shell, let the world go to hell
It's like Russian roulette to you
SNAP!
Sweat running cold, you can't face growing old
It's a personal threat to you
SNAP!
The world is a cage for your impotent rage
But don't let it get to you
SNAP!

Truth is false and logic lost
Now the fourth dimension is crossed

One, two, three -
Add without subtraction
Sound on sound
Multiplied reaction
H to O
No flow without the other

He's got a force field and a flexible plan
He's got a date with fate in a black sedan
He plays fast forward for as long as he can
But he won't need a bed -

I think that pretty much covers all of the ones I don't like.

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I like that show where they solve all the murders

An heroic point of view

It's got justice and vengeance too

At least so the story goes

I like that story, makes a satisfying case

But there's a messy point of view

That's sadly just as true

For so many among us

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"We are strangers to the same chromosome."

 

Good grief, if you're going to pick on his lyrics you should at least know what they are. What you wrote makes no sense. The actual line is "You and I, we are strangers by one chromosome". It's a creative way to separate men from women. Alien Shore is my favorite song on Counterparts musically and lyrically and one of my all-time favorite Rush songs.

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Fair points psionic, I think that most of that just has to to with who Neil is. He is comfortable with structure and formality for the most part and that can be a strength or a weakness depending on what you like. It appeals to me personally more because I guess I'm kind of a control freak who appreciates order more than chaos. I'm not saying that makes it better though.
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QUOTE (psionic11 @ Oct 11 2007, 08:47 PM)


Stay! Go!
Work! No!
Learn! Live!
Earn! Give!
Stay or fight? What's right?
Listen!






Ya know , I'm almost ashamed to say but up to just now,

I was never able to decipher Geddy on Didacts and Narpets except...

 

 

 

LISTEN!!!!!!

Thanks. biggrin.gif

 

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QUOTE (psionic11 @ Oct 12 2007, 12:48 AM)
What other lyricist is mentioned more in English class?  1022.gif

(Dylan?  Lennon?  McCartney?)

Actually as a matter of fact, yes, Dylan for his poetry book Tarantula and his lyrics, and particularly John Lennon and Paul McCartney. There are university English courses offered at Cambridge and Oxford and a few schools in Canada and the United States that consist entirely of analysing Beatles lyrics, "Eleanor Rigby" being one of them as an apparent perfect study of loneliness, as well as Lennon's books that he has written.

 

And don't forget Leonard Cohen, both a master writer of novels and poems and a great lyricist. He's constantly studied in both high school and university for both sides of his writing personality.

 

I still really like your post though, and still think most of Neil's work is top notch.

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Even with the "Bad lyrics" of some of the songs you mention, I still listen to the songs. I may not care for the lyrics, but I enjoy the music very much. I just try in these instances to listen past the lyrics.

 

 

I like "Dog years" very much....musically speaking.

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God, I have always wanted them to re-do Virtuality with mew lyrics. I LOVE the riffs and music to the song, but the lyrics certainly turn me off.

 

Peart's cerebral lyric writing is a BIG part of why I love Rush, but I do have to admit, there are some less-than-strong examples in the catalog.

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I have never understood why some hate Nobody's Hero, personally I love the lyrics in the song. well to each his own

 

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I knew that he was gay
But that didn't bother me
I went to his gay parties
as the straight minority
never seemed a threat
to my masculinity
he only introduced me
to men all on their knees

 

Nobody's Hero was discussed on another thread and when someone asked why it wasn't more popular I responded that a lot of it has to do with homophobic attitudes. Almost every time I hear NH referenced outside of Rush fan boards (and sometimes on the boards) it's referred to as "that gay song". Then someone on that thread said I was being offensive by suggesting that if you don't like NH then you're a homophobe. That's not what I said but anyone who denies that it's one of the main issues must be blind.

 

I don't know if King Rygar is making fun of the song here or making fun of people's attitudes toward the song but it's almost always the focal point of the criticism.

 

 

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QUOTE (King Rygar @ Oct 12 2007, 10:58 AM)
I knew that he was gay
But that didn't bother me
I went to his gay parties
as the straight minority
never seemed a threat
to my masculinity
he only introduced me
to men all on their knees

dazed025.gif Sorry, but that's just dumb. Do you feel threatened by homosexuality or something? You should be happy there are gays, leaves more women for the rest of you guys (if you're indeed a man sarcasm.gif ).

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QUOTE (King Rygar @ Oct 12 2007, 03:58 PM)
I knew that he was gay
But that didn't bother me
I went to his gay parties
as the straight minority
never seemed a threat
to my masculinity
he only introduced me
to men all on their knees

wtf.gif

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QUOTE (GeddyRulz @ Oct 11 2007, 10:25 PM)
QUOTE (snowdog2112 @ Oct 11 2007, 09:01 PM)
Imagine Neil writing these and all of a sudden everything you listed looks like Shakespeare.

True! Even Neil's worst lyrics say more than your typical Cock Rocker band. But...

 

I see red

It hurts my head

Couldn't we talk about something else instead?

 

Sounds like the poem of an 8th grader.

What's wrong with a little simplicity from time to time?

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