Jump to content

Is Neil a great lyricist?


Disco

Recommended Posts

QUOTE (Lee S-335 @ Nov 23 2004, 09:45 PM)
QUOTE (CygnusX-1Bk2 @ Nov 23 2004, 09:32 PM)
There's LEE, changing his name..... AGAIN!?!
I thought you'd settled.
biggrin.gif

Yea ... lol ... time for a change ... again!?!?

 

at least it is almost the same!

How do you change your name??? I'd love to change mine.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

QUOTE (paganoman @ Nov 23 2004, 11:49 PM)
QUOTE (Lee S-335 @ Nov 23 2004, 09:45 PM)
QUOTE (CygnusX-1Bk2 @ Nov 23 2004, 09:32 PM)
There's LEE, changing his name..... AGAIN!?!
I thought you'd settled.
biggrin.gif

Yea ... lol ... time for a change ... again!?!?

 

at least it is almost the same!

How do you change your name??? I'd love to change mine.

I like your name. It has a cool look to it.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

QUOTE (NeilPeartFan2112 @ Nov 23 2004, 05:59 PM)
I think Neil's lyrics are great because they are original. So many bands today write songs about the same things over and over again. That's one of the reasons why Rush is so great. They have that original sound to them, which goes along with the lyrics. Anyone agree with me? NeilFinal.gif

Oh YES! Whatelse can I say......

Link to comment
Share on other sites

QUOTE (paganoman @ Nov 23 2004, 10:49 PM)
QUOTE (Lee S-335 @ Nov 23 2004, 09:45 PM)
QUOTE (CygnusX-1Bk2 @ Nov 23 2004, 09:32 PM)
There's LEE, changing his name..... AGAIN!?!
I thought you'd settled.
biggrin.gif

Yea ... lol ... time for a change ... again!?!?

 

at least it is almost the same!

How do you change your name??? I'd love to change mine.

If you REALLY want to change, I can help you with that.

 

For a small fee, of course. wink.gif

 

PM me.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Wise words from moonraker and I can only agree with what's been said about Afterimages and Analog kid.

 

I think that, like the music, often the intellect takes proitity over the heart - and that's no bad thing, but

 

NP has always got a fresh take on things, like in Vapor Trails I find a lot of the songs about recovering from hardship (One Little Victory, Secret Touch, Sweet Miracle) while most writers would have written about the hardship itself. I just don't get that take from else where.

 

I like the reserved emotion of his writing. In your life if you go through hardship you don't actually spend your time wailing to every person you meet, in fact it's the opposite you try to contain it, people outwardly stay the same, emotion slips out and reveals itself in brief unguarded moments. I find this, especially with Vapor Trails, underneath the detached style there is such pain that the emotion slips out and reveals itself.

 

- this all makes sense if you have the emotional range of an Englishman

Link to comment
Share on other sites

QUOTE (esmeralda @ Nov 24 2004, 12:41 AM)
QUOTE (NeilPeartFan2112 @ Nov 23 2004, 05:59 PM)
I think Neil's lyrics are great because they are original.  So many bands today write songs about the same things over and over again.  That's one of the reasons why Rush is so great.  They have that original sound to them, which goes along with the lyrics.  Anyone agree with me? NeilFinal.gif

Oh YES! Whatelse can I say......

I don't think you can say anything else because it's right laugh.gif yes.gif trink39.gif

Link to comment
Share on other sites

QUOTE (BigG @ Nov 30 2004, 04:00 PM)
Wise words from moonraker and I can only agree with what's been said about Afterimages and Analog kid.

I think that, like the music, often the intellect takes proitity over the heart - and that's no bad thing, but

NP has always got a fresh take on things, like in Vapor Trails I find a lot of the songs about recovering from hardship (One Little Victory, Secret Touch, Sweet Miracle) while most writers would have written about the hardship itself. I just don't get that take from else where.

I like the reserved emotion of his writing. In your life if you go through hardship you don't actually spend your time wailing to every person you meet, in fact it's the opposite you try to contain it, people outwardly stay the same, emotion slips out and reveals itself in brief unguarded moments. I find this, especially with Vapor Trails, underneath the detached style there is such pain that the emotion slips out and reveals itself.

- this all makes sense if you have the emotional range of an Englishman

yes.gif trink39.gif

Link to comment
Share on other sites

QUOTE (RushRevisited @ Nov 30 2004, 03:09 PM)
QUOTE (BigG @ Nov 30 2004, 04:00 PM)
Wise words from moonraker and I can only agree with what's been said about Afterimages and Analog kid.

I think that, like the music, often the intellect takes proitity over the heart - and that's no bad thing, but

NP has always got a fresh take on things, like in Vapor Trails I find a lot of the songs about recovering from hardship (One Little Victory, Secret Touch, Sweet Miracle) while most writers would have written about the hardship itself. I just don't get that take from else where.

I like the reserved emotion of his writing. In your life if you go through hardship you don't actually spend your time wailing to every person you meet, in fact it's the opposite you try to contain it, people outwardly stay the same, emotion slips out and reveals itself in brief unguarded moments. I find this, especially with Vapor Trails, underneath the detached style there is such pain that the emotion slips out and reveals itself.

- this all makes sense if you have the emotional range of an Englishman

yes.gif trink39.gif

I agree. Very well said, Moon and BigG.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

QUOTE (GhostGirl @ Nov 30 2004, 04:18 PM)
QUOTE (RushRevisited @ Nov 30 2004, 03:09 PM)
QUOTE (BigG @ Nov 30 2004, 04:00 PM)
Wise words from moonraker and I can only agree with what's been said about Afterimages and Analog kid.

I think that, like the music, often the intellect takes proitity over the heart - and that's no bad thing, but

NP has always got a fresh take on things, like in Vapor Trails I find a lot of the songs about recovering from hardship (One Little Victory, Secret Touch, Sweet Miracle) while most writers would have written about the hardship itself. I just don't get that take from else where.

I like the reserved emotion of his writing. In your life if you go through hardship you don't actually spend your time wailing to every person you meet, in fact it's the opposite you try to contain it, people outwardly stay the same, emotion slips out and reveals itself in brief unguarded moments. I find this, especially with Vapor Trails, underneath the detached style there is such pain that the emotion slips out and reveals itself.

- this all makes sense if you have the emotional range of an Englishman

yes.gif trink39.gif

I agree. Very well said, Moon and BigG.

Yes indeed. Nicely said. trink39.gif

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Neil doesn't preach, doesn't offer answers and doesn't make proclaimations. He offers concise arguements, perspectives and ideas and challenges the listener to think.

 

I've said before that one of the reasons I initially got into Rush was that I was listening to a lot of AC/DC, Judas Priest, Black Sabbath, Irons Maiden, Thin Lizzy etc., and while Rush's initial impact on me (The Spirit of Radio) was musical, it was Neil's lyrics that set them apart.

 

BTW, has anyone read the Rush for Dummies series?. I saw it on Counterparts earlier this year, apparently it originated on Alt Music - Rush (which I'ver never seen). It is sacreligious, rude, libellous, sometimes disgusting and the downright funniest thing I have read in years!!!.

 

Let's just say, it would take a lot of editing to post it here under this forum's rules.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

QUOTE (madra sneachta @ Nov 30 2004, 07:08 PM)

BTW, has anyone read the Rush for Dummies series?. I saw it on Counterparts earlier this year, apparently it originated on Alt Music - Rush (which I'ver never seen). It is sacreligious, rude, libellous, sometimes disgusting and the downright funniest thing I have read in years!!!.

Let's just say, it would take a lot of editing to post it here under this forum's rules.

yes.gif yes.gif yes.gif yes.gif

 

laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif laugh.gif

 

 

Link to comment
Share on other sites

OK BigG (or whomsoever wants to join in) let's head to head it. We'll duel.

 

I'll set out some lyrics the I reckon are the bees kness and then you set out some Neil lyrics that, you reckon, match it.

 

If, in the not too unlikely event, that we disagree which of the two is self evidently the better we'll all have a discussion.

 

I'm gonna hit you with a big 'un first - what's Neil got to match this from Leonard Cohen's 'Dance Me to the End of Love'?

 

'Dance me to your beauty with a burning violin

Dance me thru the panic till I'm gathered safely in

Lift me like an olive branch, and be me homeward dove

Dance me to the end of love

 

Let me see your beauty what the witnesses have gone [the killer line]

Let me feel you moving like they do in Babylon

Show me slowly what i only know the limited of

Dance me to the end of love'

 

Let's have it, what's Neil got for that one?

 

Disco

 

 

 

 

 

 

Link to comment
Share on other sites

I: Prelude

 

When our weary world was young

The stuggle of the ancients first began

The God's of love and reason

Sought alone to rule the fate of man.

 

The battled through the ages

But still neither force would yield

Their people were divided

Every soul a battlefield.

 

II: Apollo -- Bringer of Wisdom

 

I bring truth and understanding

I bring wit and wisdom fair

Precious gifts beyond compare

We can build a world of wonder

I can make you all aware.

 

I will find you food and shelter

Show you fire to keep you warm

Through the endless winter storm

You can live in grace and comfort

In the world that you transform.

 

The people were delighted

Coming forth to claim their prize

They ran to build their cities

And converse among the wise.

 

But one day the streets fell silent

Yet they knew not what was wrong

The urge to build these fine things

Seemed not to be so strong.

 

The wise men were consulted

And the Bridge of Death was crossed

In quest of Dionysus

To find out what they had lost.

 

III: Dionysus -- Bringer of Love

 

I bring love to give you solace

In the darkest of the night

In the hearts eternal light

You need only trust your feelings

Only love can steer you right.

 

I bring laughter, I bring music

I bring joy, and I bring tears

I will soothe your primal fears

Throw off those chains of reason

And your prison disappears.

 

The cities were abandoned

And the forests echoed song

They danced and lived as brothers

They knew love could not be wrong

 

Food and wine they had aplenty

And they slept beneath the stars

The people were contented

And the God's watched from afar.

 

But the winter fell upon them

And it caught them unprepared

Bringing wolves and cold starvation

And the hearts of men despaired.

 

IV: Armageddon -- The Battle of Heart and Mind

 

The universe didvided

As the heart and mind collided

With a people left unguided

For so many troubled years

In a cloud of doubts and fears

Our world was torn asunder

Into hollow hemispheres.

 

Some fought themselves

Some fought each other

Most just followed one another

Lost and aimless like their brothers

For their hearts were so unclear

And the truth could not appear

Their spirits were divided

Into blinded hemispheres.

 

Some who did not fight

Brought tales of old to light

My Rocinante sailed by night

On her final flight

 

To the heart of Cygnus' fearsome force

We set our course

Sailed through that timeless space

To this immortal place.

 

V: Cygnus -- Bringer of Balance

 

I have memory and awarness

But I have no sphape or form

As disembodied spirit

I am dead, and yet unborn.

 

I have passed into Olympus

As was told in tales of old

To the city of immortals

Marble white and purest gold.

 

I see the God's in battle rage on high

Thunderbolts across the sky

I cannot move, I cannot hide

I feel a silent scream begin inside.

 

Then all at once the Chaos ceased

A stillness fell, a sudden peace

The warriors felt my silent cry

And stayed their struggle, mystified.

 

Apollo was astonished

Dionysus thought me mad

But they heard my story further

And they wondered and were sad.

 

Looking down from Olympus

On a world of doubt and fear

It's surface splintered into

Sorry hemispheres.

 

They sat a while in silence

Then they turned at last to me

We will call you Cygnus,

The God of Balance you shall be.

 

VI: The Sphere -- A Kind of Dream

 

We can walk our road together

If our goals are all the same

We can run alone and free

If we pursue a different aim.

 

Let the truth of love be lighted

Let the love of truth shine clear

Sensibility, Armed with sense and liberty

With the heart and mind united

In a single perfect sphere.

 

Neil Peart-1

Leonard Cohen-0 applaudit.gif

Link to comment
Share on other sites

QUOTE (RushRevisited @ Dec 2 2004, 10:37 PM)
QUOTE (Rolinda Bonz @ Dec 2 2004, 10:26 PM)
I lost my husband a couple of years ago

That sucks sad.gif I'm so sorry...

Thanks, RR. I'll be ok unsure.gif ....someday.

I'm really glad you guys (and Girl) started TRF. It's nice to be able to have meaningful conversations with peers without having to get a babysitter.

Thanks! biggrin.gif

 

But let's not lose this thread

There's a whole lot more to be said

About Neil and his lyrics

2.gif atmospherics

And the things that go on in my head

 

 

"I hear their passionate music

Read the words that touch my heart"

 

 

 

 

 

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Disco,

 

You're right that Cohen does capture that great wonder of finding love, of finding someonr to pull you headlong into a great unknowable journey of intense contentment.

 

I don't think anything from the NP can match that. The closest is 'Salvation' in Sweet Miracle.

 

But then where is Cohen's work on flying a spaceship into a black hole finding the universe of gods? Has he written anything on talking Trees?

 

 

Link to comment
Share on other sites

QUOTE (Disco @ Dec 3 2004, 12:02 AM)
OK BigG (or whomsoever wants to join in) let's head to head it. We'll duel.

I'll set out some lyrics the I reckon are the bees kness and then you set out some Neil lyrics that, you reckon, match it.

If, in the not too unlikely event, that we disagree which of the two is self evidently the better we'll all have a discussion.

I'm gonna hit you with a big 'un first - what's Neil got to match this from Leonard Cohen's 'Dance Me to the End of Love'?

'Dance me to your beauty with a burning violin
Dance me thru the panic till I'm gathered safely in
Lift me like an olive branch, and be me homeward dove
Dance me to the end of love

Let me see your beauty what the witnesses have gone [the killer line]
Let me feel you moving like they do in Babylon
Show me slowly what i only know the limited of
Dance me to the end of love'

Let's have it, what's Neil got for that one?

Disco

I actuall think what you proposed is completely and utterly pointless for one reason -

 

When you are talking about anything to do with the arts, be it music, literature, painting, sculpture, film, TV, etc, the comments that are going to be made by anyone are 100% subjective. People like what they like and no amount of saying this is better than that is going to resolve the issue in people's minds.

 

For example, I got into an argument with my brother years ago when he started slagging Neil's lyrics as being too vague and obscure. He started out by saying that he didn't like it when Neil wrote 'airy-fairy' lyrics like 2112. He preferred down to earth reality like Red barchetta. Needless to say, he wasn't amused when I pointed out the lyrics to Red Barchetta are on an immediate level, about rebellion in a dystopian future (I didn't phrase it like that because, at the age of 16, I'd never heard the word dystopian). He then went on to say that the greatest lyrical couplet in the world was:-

 

'Went for a job at the refinery

Hiring man said son if it was up to me'

 

(is it me or that a desperate search for a rhyme).

 

Anyway, back to the question in hand.

 

I think Big G is right when he points out that it impossible to compare the two of them as their subject matter is so opposite. Neil may not be the greatest writer of love songs in the world, but he excels in other areas.

 

Has Cohen ever written anything on the subject of suicide to match:

 

'No hero in your tragedy

No daring in your disgrace

No salutes for your surrender

Nothing noble in your fate

Christ what have you done?'

 

As I said, its all subjective.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Well, BiGG how wierd is that!!

 

I was on the train home and listed to four tracks from Vapor Trails (Vapor Trails, Secret Touch, Earthshine, and Sweet Miracle) and as I hear Sweet Miracle, I thought I'm going to hop the fence on this thread and say NP's the bees knees, the key lyrics being:

 

'Oh salvation

Oh salvation

 

I wasn't praying for magic

I was hiding in plain sight

Rising up from the surface

To fly into the light'

 

Beautul lyrics about pain, finding love and redemption. too wierd you pickjed out the same ones.

 

And yeah, I like the song about the talking trees, but personally I like 'Natural Science' in which our hero becomes very small and goes into this, like, small tidal pool in which all the little creatures then go into hyperspaec to meet some advertising-executives to discuss what music to use in a marketing campaign.

 

Really, the Vapor Trails lyrics, IMHO, are the best NP's ever produced.

 

Disco

 

PS Here's a wierd thing though, many years back, in 1975, he wrote 'I think I'm going Bald'. You could think this was precipitated by noticing a few hairs wandering off, and yet, oddly, not one of them has become bald. Some hair-repair shinanigans going on there I think....

 

(And yes Slaine Mac Roth, you are right, I was very drunk [and wearing a tuxedo, glam old me] when I posted last night)

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Archived

This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    • No registered users viewing this page.
×
×
  • Create New...