The Notorious B.S.G. Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 Yo Barn! Waddup dude? Like Bruce in Die Hard I say: "Welcome to the party, pal!" And what a neat tribute to our own Alsgalpal Keep 'em coming, good man Bustin' rhymes all you can Psych! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barney_rebel Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 Yo yo I know a Bruce but not Willis He will burn you like syphilis Like Geddy rocks on a 4-string is hot like AlsGal in a G-string He'll send you home - Return to Sender Listen to Geddy as he rocks the Fender like an orgasm begins to come Neil begins to drum oh no here comes the drum solo I wouldn't miss it as if its my last Rolo Word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barney_rebel Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 2 User(s) are reading this topic (0 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users) 2 Members: barney_rebel, Alsgalpal Yo yo we talk about what's so sweet Even sweeter than Trick or Treat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
madra sneachta Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 Barney's in da house, wrecking your head, he works under his own steam, he doesn't need no Fred. Da rhymes run fresh, he harbours no stagnation, coming from a place outside of our imagination. Your Xanadu preferences he wants to discern, your Rushian motivations are a matter of concern. Like Rush's new world man, he's a rebel and a runner, to the sisterhood I'll bet he's a top grade Class A stunner. When you fall within his sights, you know he's gona get ya. precise in his direction like the bass in Red Barchetta. He's the Canadian standard, Toronto's Rush MC, living in the limelight, saying "zed", not "zee". Peace bro! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barney_rebel Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 Let me drop the mic one more time listen to Barney as he spits da rhyme When he ryhmes he's in tha zone rapping better than Roll the Bones but just like him he'll get busy with the facts watch him go as he lays down the tracks right order from Rush to Feedback like Peart a story has been told now Madra it's tha mic ya hold Peace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LakesideMaiden Posted October 13, 2004 Author Share Posted October 13, 2004 Damn yo.... y'all are just bustin my poetry right out of the water these raps are well metered, im like a lamb put to slaughter I feel like I'm watchin John Cena before a wrestling match Bustin out rhymes, and talkin' 'bout Manny's latest catch To Barney and Madra you have me at a loss Very well matched, my decision is up in a toss As to who is the better at 'wreckin da heads' and 'spittin' da rhymes' as I lie sleepin in bed So I give to you both a hearty BRAVO!! You are both great masters of this Rapping Show Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barney_rebel Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 (free verse poem) Discovery Hip-hop comes in many forms I tell him hip-hop will tell you stories stories not just about a kid ...living in the ghetto not just about bitches and hos I say I love my hip-hop No one can be as smart as Chuck D from PE ...rap really speaks the mind Rock comes in many forms too he tells me rock is intelligent too not all about drug addicts ...with long hair banging their heads He says I love my Rush Please borrow my tape It is a concert ...one called 'Exit Stage Left' For Garry (my first black-Canadian friend) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barney_rebel Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 Yo yo I have time to stall two minutes before my conference call I just wanna say peace to ya'll glad to share my thoughts to you like Rush I will flow right through you I will say my rhymes like a rap guru Peace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LakesideMaiden Posted October 13, 2004 Author Share Posted October 13, 2004 Suh-Weeeeet!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barney_rebel Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 (edited) Yo that call was bogus bullshit is all they showed us 'it's your fault, not my fault' I just want to assault each and every one of them like the repubs verses dems constant yelling I can longer take just shut the f*ck up and your bullshit case I just wanna lie down soon on my bed and crank up a tune now I want to mellow out yo sounds of La Villa Strangiato take my pulse to a slower pace forget about my shitty workplace Peace Edited October 13, 2004 by barney_rebel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barney_rebel Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 it is my pleasure to show you this treasure like a diamond like a pearl plz check out this URL http://www.rhymzone.com ENJOY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alex_cartman Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 Roses are dead flowers are stinky. come over here and pull my pinky. h my god whats that smell screw u and go to hell Im hellified and hellicool Alex geddy and neil look kind of gay but their music rules Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LakesideMaiden Posted October 13, 2004 Author Share Posted October 13, 2004 Cartman you be by your member name sake But Cartman you are by the actions you take How dare you sully the names of my boys In such a way that they are other boys toys?!! You may have redeemed yourself slightly by saying How ruling their music is that they're playing But how can you preceed it by lines so sophmoric? and sully my thread with poetry so moronic? ......you know I'm just joshin' you right AC? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barney_rebel Posted October 14, 2004 Share Posted October 14, 2004 Yo Cart Have a heart thread was going well yet you tore it apart You try to bring it down as if we were Wal-Mart Yo can't you see this is art? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
madra sneachta Posted October 14, 2004 Share Posted October 14, 2004 If Wordsworth and Peart collaborated....... "I wondered lonely as a cloud, through futuristic countryside. When all at once I heard a gleaming alloy air car, two lanes wide." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
madra sneachta Posted October 15, 2004 Share Posted October 15, 2004 On September 11th this year, I saw my first Rush gig having been a fan for 22 years. It was a day of emotion for me, and I wanted to write something to commemorate it. While it was never mentioned at the gig, the fact that it was 9/11 seemed to hover in the background (with me, at any rate). In turn, that became part of the poem. The easiest part was comingh up with the name!!. Emotional Feedback 1. NEC Within these walls are written tales of reputations won and lost. Here, silent echoes reverberate where the masses gathered to hail heroes, and sometimes wonder why old magic was not rekindled. These walls look on impassively while transient souls seek solace in sound or vent frustration with shaking heads. Many guitars have been played here, some of wood and steel, but most of air. Invisible sticks have beaten tattoos on phantom snares and toms conveniently hovering before the expectant masses. This floor has moved with the force of a million feet, some in time, some in a different dimension. Once, 16 years ago, this hall bore witness to A Show Of Hands. Now, those echoes are reborn in a new show of hands two of which are mine. 2. September 11th 2004 On this day of realised ambition my triumph is tempered by significance. This date, momentous in history, forever shackled with memory of death. But here, in the midst of emotional feedback, we affirm life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
madra sneachta Posted October 17, 2004 Share Posted October 17, 2004 I haven't very much to say, but this I had to do. This font of rhyme and rap and verse can't be allowed fall back to page two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
madra sneachta Posted October 18, 2004 Share Posted October 18, 2004 I sem to be hogging this thread at the moment, but it seems right to do this here - I like to think that I'm a groover though my limerick skills suck like a hoover But forgive me this boast it's my 500th post So I guess that I'm now a Prime Mover!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LakesideMaiden Posted October 18, 2004 Author Share Posted October 18, 2004 Madra, hon, that's quite alright for you to make such a commotion I, for one, am on my way, and have set such things in motion For it is not an easy feat to attain the rank of Prime Mover And if I was in your very shoes, I'd really be a groover Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barney_rebel Posted October 18, 2004 Share Posted October 18, 2004 (edited) Barney's back like a squeeling tire here to tell you about Hold Your Fire if you listen to it from begining to end first track you'll hear is Force Ten before track two you'll get your thrill you'll get that from Time Stand Still Opens Secrets will begin the next track It's Second Nature to run from attack When you run you're a Prime Mover Speeding from Toronto to Vancouver You busted and need to plea but you get jailed with a Lock and Key next Mission is to escape from jail Turn the Page and you get bail Tai Shan will have a climb that's too steep High Water will drown because it's deep Edited October 18, 2004 by barney_rebel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alsgalpal Posted October 18, 2004 Share Posted October 18, 2004 You are so awesome, babe!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Notorious B.S.G. Posted October 18, 2004 Share Posted October 18, 2004 Madra my man, you've done it once more And now a Prime Mover, you're ready to soar! So please keep it coming, give us your verse In styles many, on subjects diverse And now in that vein, allow me to rhyme Of experiences gone, in the mists of time Fly By Night/In the Mood made quite an impression I wanted to see, the trio in question They made all that racket with only those three? Now THIS was something I needed to see "Hemispheres" the release the latest LP To see it played live, would surely give glee A concert was planned, arena was booked But one detail could not be overlooked To get Mom's permission, was my last dispute Her arguments many I couldn't refute "Because I said so, and 'cause you're too young!" "Don't give me that look! Don't stick out your tongue!" "Besides that boy Mattson, just cannot be trusted!" So I sought to get out, but not to get busted I'm outta here Ma! Now, what did you say? I just didn't hear ya! There was no way! With Mattson's loud car, and smoke belching forth So in it we hopped, and headed due north. The boys were en fuego they were unsurpassed It just was too short, I wanted it to last. They played Cygnus one and Cygnus Book two. They played in La Villa, and of course Xanadu There wasn't a classic, the boys wouldn't share We also partook of much smoke in the air I did later learn, they played "Radio" It was pre-release and rarin' to go Ah, for those days of cluelessly young And innocence lost, and wisdom did come From tales of battle between heart and mind A balance is struck, and Cygnus we find He keeps it all square he does it for free For each of us now, he charges no fee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LakesideMaiden Posted October 19, 2004 Author Share Posted October 19, 2004 Very nicely done my friends Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barney_rebel Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 QUOTE (Alsgalpal @ Oct 18 2004, 01:22 AM) You are so awesome, babe!!!!! Sweet darling with those cute eyes I could gobble you down like french fries But really I'm waiting on the main course It will be bumpy like riding a horse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alsgalpal Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 QUOTE (barney_rebel @ Oct 18 2004, 10:48 PM) QUOTE (Alsgalpal @ Oct 18 2004, 01:22 AM) You are so awesome, babe!!!!! Sweet darling with those cute eyes I could gobble you down like french fries But really I'm waiting on the main course It will be bumpy like riding a horse You are again, so awesome... very talented, in all areas.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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