Riv Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 QUOTE (RushRevisited @ Sep 20 2004, 09:45 PM) QUOTE (Rivendell @ Sep 21 2004, 12:43 AM) This is something that hurts my head unfortunately I'm going to bed. You big pansy you, Your lines only number two! If you weren't such a bore, you would have come up with four. Listen, I am tired And tomorrow I must be wired So get off my case shut yo face!!! HAHA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LakesideMaiden Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 QUOTE (Rivendell @ Sep 21 2004, 12:52 AM) QUOTE (RushRevisited @ Sep 20 2004, 09:45 PM) QUOTE (Rivendell @ Sep 21 2004, 12:43 AM) This is something that hurts my head unfortunately I'm going to bed. You big pansy you, Your lines only number two! If you weren't such a bore, you would have come up with four. Listen, I am tired And tomorrow I must be wired So get off my case shut yo face!!! HAHA LOL! Such anger Riv Dear Well, get your rest, you need it quite clear Rhyming these lines comes almost natural it seems So I'll just keep posting, as most people dream So sleep on, dear friends and when you awake, New rhymes will be here for your eyes sake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RushRevisited Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 QUOTE (Rivendell @ Sep 21 2004, 12:52 AM) QUOTE (RushRevisited @ Sep 20 2004, 09:45 PM) QUOTE (Rivendell @ Sep 21 2004, 12:43 AM) This is something that hurts my head unfortunately I'm going to bed. You big pansy you, Your lines only number two! If you weren't such a bore, you would have come up with four. Listen, I am tired And tomorrow I must be wired So get off my case shut yo face!!! HAHA It must be jet lag, that west coast time, you are used to normal, I can't think of a rhyme. Goodnight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midway Hawker Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 This is quite a Thread That started because of Zed That voice in my head Are lyrics from Ged I need to go to bed! This thread simply proves That RUSH fans are quite smooth With their Wisdom and their Wit Maybe we are full of ....? But soon this thread will pass Before it becomes a pain in the ass Like memories from the past Through the eyes of the looking-glass Tomorrow is a new day I must leave this fray To others who will certainly say "Just go the hell away!" I could go on and on And continue this song But now it is getting long And the ideas are about gone But before I go I have just one thing to say Don't ever eat snow On a sunny day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
madra sneachta Posted September 21, 2004 Author Share Posted September 21, 2004 Draconator (Counterparts supremo Ken) is fond of pointing out that if you look at a thread, anything after the 10th post will bear no relation to the title of the thread. Can I just remind you this thread started with an enquiry about how the letter "Z" is pronounced in Canada "The rhyming skills on this board are showing the interest in iambic pentamater is growing. The question is where do we take it from here, what poetic direction should we choose when we steer?. Should this awesome expression of verbosity be binned, or should the evidence of our verbosity be pinned?". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LakesideMaiden Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 QUOTE (madra sneachta @ Sep 21 2004, 03:54 AM) Draconator (Counterparts supremo Ken) is fond of pointing out that if you look at a thread, anything after the 10th post will bear no relation to the title of the thread. Can I just remind you this thread started with an enquiry about how the letter "Z" is pronounced in Canada "The rhyming skills on this board are showing the interest in iambic pentamater is growing. The question is where do we take it from here, what poetic direction should we choose when we steer?. Should this awesome expression of verbosity be binned, or should the evidence of our verbosity be pinned?". LOL Madra you are very good at rhyming And Draconator was right about the subject declining but I think that we have found a right good way to interact and be creative, and very socialable today So as to this awesome expression of verbosity being binned? I say, to that, Hell NO!, this is where our stage begins So please, if you must, go right ahead and pin This fabu thread of creativity, my Rush kith and kin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Aubrey Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 I'm no good at rhymes but here's a slightly tongue-in-cheek haiku: The Rush fans rhyme well. All showing some Peart-like skill. Well, not exactly....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RushRevisited Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 I don't know why, I will not lie, Rush fans are the best, at carrying on this mess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
madra sneachta Posted September 21, 2004 Author Share Posted September 21, 2004 QUOTE (Jack Aubrey @ Sep 21 2004, 04:07 PM) I'm no good at rhymes but here's a slightly tongue-in-cheek haiku: The Rush fans rhyme well. All showing some Peart-like skill. Well, not exactly....... That may be true but nothing here is as questionable as Dog Years Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Notorious B.S.G. Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 Where are we headed? It's hard to say But we'll have fun, along the way And so carry on with rhyme and pun Remembrin' that tis all in fun And here's another, off the top o' me 'ead But have no fear, and have no dread Cause one more hair goes with it too But this happens to ME, not you And so my shiny-pated brothers we Earthshine, Jack (and of course, me!) Will wash one more follicle down the drain And watch it go, with wistful pain "Earthshine" now "Headshine", "B" stands for bald We've yet to determine, what Jack will be called Chromes domes we, Unite! Unite! We can't give up without a fight! Hair plugs, weaves, and toupees yes! Will surely make the ladies guess Is that hair real or memorex? We'll let ya know after we've had..... luvin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alsgalpal Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 QUOTE (BSG @ Sep 21 2004, 01:23 PM) Where are we headed? It's hard to say But we'll have fun, along the way And so carry on with rhyme and pun Remembrin' that tis all in fun And here's another, off the top o' me 'ead But have no fear, and have no dread Cause one more hair goes with it too But this happens to ME, not you And so my shiny-pated brothers we Earthshine, Jack (and of course, me!) Will wash one more follicle down the drain And watch it go, with wistful pain "Earthshine" now "Headshine", "B" stands for bald We've yet to determine, what Jack will be called Chromes domes we, Unite! Unite! We can't give up without a fight! Hair plugs, weaves, and toupees yes! Will surely make the ladies guess Is that hair real or memorex? We'll let ya know after we've had..... luvin' Bald Sweet Guy!!!! There we go!!!!!! If you use Nioxin, Then ya can go foxin... I am not much of a lyricist, but Nioxin, is right up my alley!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midway Hawker Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 Oh me, now we are talking about Pharmisutical Drugs Oh my, can't we just get back to kisses and hugs And since we are talking about Nioxin We can't forget the Pharm name for Viagra: Mycoxafloppin I think that now I might be on a roll so butter me up and give me TP for my Bung Hole!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostGirl Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 I find myself reading down to see what the last lines are going to be... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LakesideMaiden Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 QUOTE (GhostGirl @ Sep 21 2004, 04:44 PM) I find myself reading down to see what the last lines are going to be... I find myself checking in every once in awhile to see what else has been stated, This is wonderful, but my dear, what in the world have we created?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Notorious B.S.G. Posted September 22, 2004 Share Posted September 22, 2004 We've created a monster, that much is true But we'll go with the flow, as we always do So with that in mind, let me just say I'm sharing with all my good, busy day I'll skip past the boring, get on to the fluff Work bores me so, you don't need that stuff Move on to the evening, when shadows fell And all in my house was good and well Travis did homework, while Emily played (She's only 5 now, and can't be waylaid) Next year at this time she will be in school And someday soon make the boys act a fool For now she's at home, and blissfully so Soon enough, soon enough, she must surely go So now back to my boy, who sits in his room Working math problems, and fighting the gloom Just one more page, and finished you'll be And then we can talk of subjects many And tell me once more, what is it you're hummin'? It sounds quite familiar, I feel the name comin' That's Ludwig Van, as sure as can be And are you aware, it's his best symphony? Hot lashings of "Joy", Or should I say "nine"? Your music teach' taught a lesson divine For this my son, is surely the peak Of that which we love, and music fans seek The high point of man, enclosed in CD Much better than watching that lousy TV So off to bed, scoot! Get under your cover I'll culture you yet, my Beethoven lover! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LakesideMaiden Posted September 22, 2004 Share Posted September 22, 2004 QUOTE (BSG @ Sep 21 2004, 11:26 PM) We've created a monster, that much is true But we'll go with the flow, as we always do So with that in mind, let me just say I'm sharing with all my good, busy day I'll skip past the boring, get on to the fluff Work bores me so, you don't need that stuff Move on to the evening, when shadows fell And all in my house was good and well Travis did homework, while Emily played (She's only 5 now, and can't be waylaid) Next year at this time she will be in school And someday soon make the boys act a fool For now she's at home, and blissfully so Soon enough, soon enough, she must surely go So now back to my boy, who sits in his room Working math problems, and fighting the gloom Just one more page, and finished you'll be And then we can talk of subjects many And tell me once more, what is it you're hummin'? It sounds quite familiar, I feel the name comin' That's Ludwig Van, as sure as can be And are you aware, it's his best symphony? Hot lashings of "Joy", Or should I say "nine"? Your music teach' taught a lesson divine For this my son, is surely the peak Of that which we love, and music fans seek The high point of man, enclosed in CD Much better than watching that lousy TV So off to bed, scoot! Get under your cover I'll culture you yet, my Beethoven lover! Bravo BSG, Bravo Very nicely done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alsgalpal Posted September 22, 2004 Share Posted September 22, 2004 You all rock!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LakesideMaiden Posted September 22, 2004 Share Posted September 22, 2004 QUOTE (Alsgalpal @ Sep 22 2004, 12:03 AM) You all rock!!!! Why thank you, thank you, my friend AGP For your kindest words and generosity In this we do, we try to do well Rhyming at times, is not easy to tell These verses we make, inspired by Give us that feeling of a "Secret Touch" That we may tap into the mind of the lyrical wonder The one known as The Professor, the God of Thunder Try as we might, we may never succeed To come close to the perfection that he has percieved We will continue, in this, our lyrical rant Just as Lerxst does, in his usual pant To you, men of we give great thanks to thee For the many years of music, to make us feel free So come all you talents, come all you wannabe's For this thread will not die if we keep adding our piece Let us wax poetic on the band we all admire And keep this thread going, the lyrics on fire!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Notorious B.S.G. Posted September 22, 2004 Share Posted September 22, 2004 QUOTE (LakesideMaiden @ Sep 22 2004, 03:08 PM) QUOTE (Alsgalpal @ Sep 22 2004, 12:03 AM) You all rock!!!! Why thank you, thank you, my friend AGP For your kindest words and generosity In this we do, we try to do well Rhyming at times, is not easy to tell These verses we make, inspired by Give us that feeling of a "Secret Touch" That we may tap into the mind of the lyrical wonder The one known as The Professor, the God of Thunder Try as we might, we may never succeed To come close to the perfection that he has percieved We will continue, in this, our lyrical rant Just as Lerxst does, in his usual pant To you, men of we give great thanks to thee For the many years of music, to make us feel free So come all you talents, come all you wannabe's For this thread will not die if we keep adding our piece Let us wax poetic on the band we all admire And keep this thread going, the lyrics on fire!! Excellent LM! This is lotsa fun! ________________________________ I pondered an answer, as plain as can be But didn't seem right, to add just a smilie RR has does it, well why cannot I? 'Cause now even he, will let the verse fly! Well now that I think, what will I try next? These simple couplets have me really vexed So on to more tough and challenging styles Whatever is needed to invoke lots of smiles Some free verse perhaps or maybe haiku A ballad sounds nice, rhyme lines 4 and 2 Limericks, didactic, the fun never ends Just get off your duff, and share with your friends Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowdog Posted September 22, 2004 Share Posted September 22, 2004 Limericks you say, BSG? There once was a man from Nantucket... aw never mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LakesideMaiden Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 QUOTE (BSG @ Sep 22 2004, 04:09 PM) QUOTE (LakesideMaiden @ Sep 22 2004, 03:08 PM) QUOTE (Alsgalpal @ Sep 22 2004, 12:03 AM) You all rock!!!! Why thank you, thank you, my friend AGP For your kindest words and generosity In this we do, we try to do well Rhyming at times, is not easy to tell These verses we make, inspired by Give us that feeling of a "Secret Touch" That we may tap into the mind of the lyrical wonder The one known as The Professor, the God of Thunder Try as we might, we may never succeed To come close to the perfection that he has percieved We will continue, in this, our lyrical rant Just as Lerxst does, in his usual pant To you, men of we give great thanks to thee For the many years of music, to make us feel free So come all you talents, come all you wannabe's For this thread will not die if we keep adding our piece Let us wax poetic on the band we all admire And keep this thread going, the lyrics on fire!! Excellent LM! This is lotsa fun! ________________________________ I pondered an answer, as plain as can be But didn't seem right, to add just a smilie RR has does it, well why cannot I? 'Cause now even he, will let the verse fly! Well now that I think, what will I try next? These simple couplets have me really vexed So on to more tough and challenging styles Whatever is needed to invoke lots of smiles Some free verse perhaps or maybe haiku A ballad sounds nice, rhyme lines 4 and 2 Limericks, didactic, the fun never ends Just get off your duff, and share with your friends I know, isn't it? I'm having a great time with this Though Im thinking of this as I add this reply How can I respond with words that don't rhyme!! It would'nt be something like Lakeside to do To leave a thread bare, and some with no clue! So as I add these last lines, I say unto thee A hearty bravo! Those are nice lines BSG! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhiannon_of_Rivendell Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhiannon_of_Rivendell Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 QUOTE (Rivendell @ Sep 21 2004, 12:20 AM)Oh brother. Hey Neighbor! I like your avatar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Notorious B.S.G. Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 QUOTE (LakesideMaiden @ Sep 22 2004, 08:27 PM) QUOTE (BSG @ Sep 22 2004, 04:09 PM) QUOTE (LakesideMaiden @ Sep 22 2004, 03:08 PM) QUOTE (Alsgalpal @ Sep 22 2004, 12:03 AM) You all rock!!!! Why thank you, thank you, my friend AGP For your kindest words and generosity In this we do, we try to do well Rhyming at times, is not easy to tell These verses we make, inspired by Give us that feeling of a "Secret Touch" That we may tap into the mind of the lyrical wonder The one known as The Professor, the God of Thunder Try as we might, we may never succeed To come close to the perfection that he has percieved We will continue, in this, our lyrical rant Just as Lerxst does, in his usual pant To you, men of we give great thanks to thee For the many years of music, to make us feel free So come all you talents, come all you wannabe's For this thread will not die if we keep adding our piece Let us wax poetic on the band we all admire And keep this thread going, the lyrics on fire!! Excellent LM! This is lotsa fun! ________________________________ I pondered an answer, as plain as can be But didn't seem right, to add just a smilie RR has does it, well why cannot I? 'Cause now even he, will let the verse fly! Well now that I think, what will I try next? These simple couplets have me really vexed So on to more tough and challenging styles Whatever is needed to invoke lots of smiles Some free verse perhaps or maybe haiku A ballad sounds nice, rhyme lines 4 and 2 Limericks, didactic, the fun never ends Just get off your duff, and share with your friends I know, isn't it? I'm having a great time with this Though Im thinking of this as I add this reply How can I respond with words that don't rhyme!! It would'nt be something like Lakeside to do To leave a thread bare, and some with no clue! So as I add these last lines, I say unto thee A hearty bravo! Those are nice lines BSG! Thank you so much, you're really too kind And now off to work, lest I lose my mind! And have I said yet? How I love your stuff? It's really quite great! I can't get enough! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Notorious B.S.G. Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 QUOTE (Snowdog @ Sep 22 2004, 07:14 PM) Limericks you say, BSG? There once was a man from Nantucket... aw never mind No, go ahead! I always wondered how that one ended! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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