Good,bad,andrush Posted November 5, 2010 Share Posted November 5, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nate2112 Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 actually that is pretty good! what type 0f music do you play? i'm lyricist for my band along with vocals, guitar, and keyboards. so i'll post mine up 2 ok! p.s. we are still thinking either Inuit or something related to Test For Echo! please help! thanks! TELEVELOCITY The northern lights in this longing space will not be avalible once more this section of velocity will not be interprized for its trace all the stars seem to soar this is a beguinnig and the city the stars all seem to move Capture everything from a canopy of fanatics to the world of the cyber space computers all try to find the sense of news and t.vs all try to find pictures in static the world and its race of humans in the truth of the lights of the storm can you be my last remaining light and we can stay together this world of loons and dolphins cries will stay in that dimension imagine a world full of light this world of ice and snow with a sense of fullness can you begin this is a world of paradise and you can be lit in this darkened soul of a large solar colloseum this is my light i share loons in a pixelated counterpart dimension cry to me... ( at this time, loons will call over extreme static.) The northern lights in this longing space will not be avalible once more this section of velocity will not be interprized for its trace all the stars seem to soar this is a beguinnig and the city the stars all seem to move... like it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Good,bad,andrush Posted December 12, 2010 Author Share Posted December 12, 2010 bunch of rush references hehheh. but it's nice, although there are spelling errors but that may have been laziness we're a prog metal band. i'll post another up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lamelight Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 Hey guys, would be interesting to hear your music if possible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Good,bad,andrush Posted December 13, 2010 Author Share Posted December 13, 2010 I soon as I record it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garbo Posted December 14, 2010 Share Posted December 14, 2010 I am guessing this is polka music? Especially with the "enter exit create destroy" and lack of commas. (I KID, I KID!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Good,bad,andrush Posted December 15, 2010 Author Share Posted December 15, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psionic11 Posted December 26, 2010 Share Posted December 26, 2010 (edited) Edited December 26, 2010 by psionic11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Good,bad,andrush Posted February 16, 2011 Author Share Posted February 16, 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Good,bad,andrush Posted March 2, 2011 Author Share Posted March 2, 2011 This one is a little darker, and i wrote it today. Inconsistent. Inconsistent, you say. Discontent, he sighs. Ignorant, why can't you just... So damn ignorant. You are Inconsistent Egotistic. So persistent, you are. With your nagging. Won't you quit it, Quit your rambling. You are Numb. It's clear you don't understand How I play with Words. It's clear you don't understand The real criminal Herds. It's clear you don't understand So damn clear. Crystal clear. So obscure, So damn clear. Sheep in wolves' clothing you are Inconsistent. Beggar with a pretty face you arre Inconsistent. I don't want to see you are Inconsistent. Juggling, you are. Crumbling, you are. Inconsistent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Good,bad,andrush Posted March 9, 2011 Author Share Posted March 9, 2011 Feedback, please, if anyone is interested. The second to last lyrics I posted go with the song I posted in the making modern music thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Good,bad,andrush Posted March 9, 2011 Author Share Posted March 9, 2011 By the way, i'd like to point out that when opened doors are closed contains a shakespearean sonnet as the bridge. While it is not a true Shakespearean sonnet (it is only lacking in iambic pentameter) I am rather proud I was able to successfully integrate it into a prog rock song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psionic11 Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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psionic11 Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 QUOTE (Good,bad,andrush @ Mar 2 2011, 03:03 AM) This one is a little darker, and i wrote it today. Inconsistent. Inconsistent, you say. Discontent, he sighs. Ignorant, why can't you just... So damn ignorant. You are Inconsistent Egotistic. So persistent, you are. With your nagging. Won't you quit it, Quit your rambling. You are Numb. It's clear you don't understand How I play with Words. It's clear you don't understand The real criminal Herds. It's clear you don't understand So damn clear. Crystal clear. So obscure, So damn clear. Sheep in wolves' clothing you are Inconsistent. Beggar with a pretty face you arre Inconsistent. I don't want to see you are Inconsistent. Juggling, you are. Crumbling, you are. Inconsistent. You've definitely got the skill, the talent, and the knack. But this esoteric delivery requires an ardent fan-base, a devoted scholarship, that may have worked back in the day when poetry was the main method of delivery. Today, in the context of movies and reviews and blogs and up-to-the-minute news and constant social connection, do you want to still deliver in this style? Maybe yes, and if so, your choice. In other words, great potential and depth, but who do you expect your audience to be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Good,bad,andrush Posted March 10, 2011 Author Share Posted March 10, 2011 (edited) I do expect my audience to read it over several times, and I do expect them to actually analyze how the lyrics work with the music. Our album is called Inverses, and one song (I'll post lyrics up later) follows a waltz pattern...except the opposite, representing Inverses. Instead up a strong opening note followed by two softer ones, it is two softer ones and a strong one. The entire album is full of stuff like this, and the songs have little moments that go with what is being said. We plan on taking a lot of time to make the album, but we hope it's well worth it. And we're going to be progressive pretty much, and the prog audience tends to analyze lyrics to a certain depth, so that's generally the audience I hope to appeal to. Edited to say that I know I sometimes force those "big" words out. It's one of my weaknesses in my writing in general. I need to learn how to use them sparingly and in a more effective manner. And plus, singing them is a mouthful! But it's a bit easier since I'm going for the MJK approach, and kind of singing in a muffled voice or something weird and singing the nicer easier parts with a true musical voice. Edited March 10, 2011 by Good,bad,andrush Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Good,bad,andrush Posted March 14, 2011 Author Share Posted March 14, 2011 Running an awful lot Feet swimming through sullen soil Hacking away Hacking away at an open knot Network of nothing loyal Eagles symbolize freedom But how is that? It's the only thing we think of Lightning's omnipotent But how is that? All it strikes cannot be seen A mirror shows reflection But how is that? It reflects nothing Windmills tilting Keep slashing Windmills tilt at me Keep hacking To get to the bottom Computers collect data But how is that? All it stores is lost A golden ring is love But how is that? It's just a sparkling circle Ignorance is bliss But how is that? We know nothing... Are we still blissful? Looking in the mirror Hearing thunder, Watching through reflection, I see An eagle soars by Lightning strikes it down blindly Just a chemical change... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WIDE-ANGLE WATCHER Posted March 15, 2011 Share Posted March 15, 2011 QUOTE (Good,bad,andrush @ Mar 14 2011, 08:55 AM) Running an awful lot Feet swimming through sullen soil Hacking away Hacking away at an open knot Network of nothing loyal Eagles symbolize freedom But how is that? It's the only thing we think of Lightning's omnipotent But how is that? All it strikes cannot be seen A mirror shows reflection But how is that? It reflects nothing Windmills tilting Keep slashing Windmills tilt at me Keep hacking To get to the bottom Computers collect data But how is that? All it stores is lost A golden ring is love But how is that? It's just a sparkling circle Ignorance is bliss But how is that? We know nothing... Are we still blissful? Looking in the mirror Hearing thunder, Watching through reflection, I see An eagle soars by Lightning strikes it down blindly Just a chemical change... I like these lyrics. Somehow, in my head, I hear YES-like music moving these lyrics along. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Good,bad,andrush Posted March 16, 2011 Author Share Posted March 16, 2011 Wow, you're kind of right. The music I thought up for this one sounds like venture by yes. It starts with piano and then becomes an "inverse" waltz. Two soft notes then a loud thumping one, and so on. It's a little darker, but besides that it is very yes inspired. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Good,bad,andrush Posted April 11, 2011 Author Share Posted April 11, 2011 Sipping, sighing, slipping Slowly dying, sleeping Can you breathe alone, alive? A life derived and compromised Unidentied castles of sand in the snow Are you glorified by gory show? she says no. I long to be with you Breathe in air so pure But you want the emptiness to consume you...please As you devour this little fire with ease Unclassified breeze amongst the willows Are you petrified? Stones in the pillows I long to keep you safe Make you heir to my... Indifferent emptiness, that feeds you your conscious Feigning ignorance, darling do you hold me precious? Let me in, won't you, let me in? Hold me, old me, scold me, cold me Now! Darling you can...breathe... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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