Tick Posted October 8, 2007 Author Share Posted October 8, 2007 Boy, my grammer has improved since i joined this forum. I guess i got tired of people picking on me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyBlaze Posted October 8, 2007 Share Posted October 8, 2007 QUOTE (tick @ Oct 9 2007, 08:23 AM)Boy, my grammer has improved since i joined this forum. I guess i got tired of people picking on me. But your spelling hasn't. There's no "e" in grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drewb93 Posted October 9, 2007 Share Posted October 9, 2007 I liked this story. Nice idea, intriguing, all around good. The only problem I have is the ending. I don't know why, but I can't stand it when an author takes something like what you've done (a great story), and then, in my opinion, diminishes it somewhat, by making it all a dream. This is just my personal opinion, but I just don't like it when an author does that. QUOTE just then a loud alarm sounded. karla are you going to sleep all day ? if this house is going to be ready for this party you best get your butt up young lady. karla hearing her mothers voice awoke from this nightmare covered in a pool of sweat. ill be right up mom, karla said adding ive been thinking, any chance i could have my old room back. THE END. If I were you, I would take that part out, and try to put in something else. That's just me, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
condemned2bfree Posted October 9, 2007 Share Posted October 9, 2007 Tick, that was cool.... really enjoyed it. More please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tick Posted October 9, 2007 Author Share Posted October 9, 2007 QUOTE (JohnnyBlaze @ Oct 8 2007, 07:39 PM) QUOTE (tick @ Oct 9 2007, 08:23 AM)Boy, my grammer has improved since i joined this forum. I guess i got tired of people picking on me. But your spelling hasn't. There's no "e" in grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grapes_under_pressure Posted October 10, 2007 Share Posted October 10, 2007 (edited) Edited October 10, 2007 by Grapes_under_pressure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grapes_under_pressure Posted October 10, 2007 Share Posted October 10, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pt2112 Posted October 11, 2007 Share Posted October 11, 2007 I enjoyed that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pt2112 Posted October 11, 2007 Share Posted October 11, 2007 QUOTE (JohnnyBlaze @ Oct 8 2007, 07:39 PM) QUOTE (tick @ Oct 9 2007, 08:23 AM)Boy, my grammer has improved since i joined this forum. I guess i got tired of people picking on me. But your spelling hasn't. There's no "e" in grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LakesideMaiden Posted October 16, 2007 Share Posted October 16, 2007 That was a very well put together story, hon! I didn't particularly care for how the witch was portrayed (as being a Satanic servant)...but, that's just the green witch in me speaking out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tick Posted October 17, 2007 Author Share Posted October 17, 2007 Well, i, umm, read my other story, its good ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grapes_under_pressure Posted October 22, 2007 Share Posted October 22, 2007 QUOTE (LakesideMaiden @ Oct 16 2007, 11:44 PM) That was a very well put together story, hon! I didn't particularly care for how the witch was portrayed (as being a Satanic servant)...but, that's just the green witch in me speaking out yes i was goin to say that... but there's good and bad things of evrything. like a tick is bad, but Tick is good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tick Posted October 22, 2007 Author Share Posted October 22, 2007 QUOTE (Grapes_under_pressure @ Oct 22 2007, 10:22 AM) QUOTE (LakesideMaiden @ Oct 16 2007, 11:44 PM) That was a very well put together story, hon! I didn't particularly care for how the witch was portrayed (as being a Satanic servant)...but, that's just the green witch in me speaking out yes i was goin to say that... but there's good and bad things of evrything. like a tick is bad, but Tick is good! and also like, Gilda was good but the Green hag was not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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