RUSHHEAD666 Posted December 1, 2016 Share Posted December 1, 2016 (edited) "Love is Blue" The Living Colours go round and round like the cult of personality.Do you hide behind your books of fictionOr do you like to glide into your rollercoaster reality? I really like youBut I can't have you.No one owns anyone on this worldNo one owns anyone inside and outsideOf the universe.How can I explain how I am really feeling whenI can't even write out the correct verse? Love is a hot emberLove is like melting in your arms by a fire in November.Love is true.Love is blue. The twisted pretzel with salt crystals makes me cry in my beer.Why is my soggy soul so insipid and filled up with frantic fear?Life is so short in the relative film of human existenceYet the eternal exit will live on forever.I wanted to be with someone for the rest of my steely knife.To form a bombastic bond equating to a concept called together. Love is a smoldering fire.Love is an empty oxygen tank strapped into a Radio Flyer.Love is true.Love is blue. Earl Ramer Edited December 1, 2016 by RUSHHEAD666 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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RUSHHEAD666 Posted December 1, 2016 Author Share Posted December 1, 2016 Thanks Lucas! You are too kind!!! Seriously, I love to write in the negativity about love but I've been writing this way for 30 years. So I'm not really bitter. This poem is about no one. No female. Perhaps it's about me. I was going to write this on paper. Instead I wanted to type something out. So I came on here. I typed this thing out of my head in seriously 3 minutes. No revisions. That poem is fresh.Right out of my brain. Cheers! 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verena Posted December 2, 2016 Share Posted December 2, 2016 Perhaps you should write more times then. Your poem is amazing. Sincerely. :D :clap: 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Posted December 2, 2016 Share Posted December 2, 2016 Earl, the first signs of genius are individuality and the knack for getting it out I agree with rhyv = DO MORE !!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RUSHHEAD666 Posted December 2, 2016 Author Share Posted December 2, 2016 Earl, the first signs of genius are individuality and the knack for getting it out I agree with rhyv = DO MORE !!! RH and Lucas! Again! Thank you both for your kind words. I'm learning that less is more.All of my past stuff is on paper. Too wordy with lots of doodles. Perhaps another influence of Neil. I need to break out on my own "FREEWILL!" LOL! RUSH ON! LOVE IS FOR SUCKERS! Signed, TWISTED SISTER 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goose Posted December 3, 2016 Share Posted December 3, 2016 Nice work there, Bud! You could do a whole series with each poem emphasizing love as a different color. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tick Posted December 3, 2016 Share Posted December 3, 2016 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verena Posted December 4, 2016 Share Posted December 4, 2016 I'm learning that less is more.All of my past stuff is on paper. Too wordy with lots of doodles. Perhaps another influence of Neil. Post them! ;) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RUSHHEAD666 Posted December 5, 2016 Author Share Posted December 5, 2016 Nice work there, Bud! You could do a whole series with each poem emphasizing love as a different color. Goose! I know we haven't talked much lately but you will always be a great friend! I love your idea! I seriously could do this. Love Is Purple..... Love Is Silver and Black........ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RUSHHEAD666 Posted December 5, 2016 Author Share Posted December 5, 2016 I'm learning that less is more.All of my past stuff is on paper. Too wordy with lots of doodles. Perhaps another influence of Neil. Post them! ;) I'm so tied up Leticia.And I do write a lot but I'm not going to put everything I write on here.Geez. People on here are sick of me as it is! LOL! If I feel confident enough then perhaps. Otherwise no. I love to write my shit at night.When I wake up in the morning I will read it again.Most of the time I hate it.But once in a "Love Is Blue" moon I dig it. Hence this thread. Cheers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verena Posted December 6, 2016 Share Posted December 6, 2016 I'm so tied up Leticia.And I do write a lot but I'm not going to put everything I write on here.Geez.Ok... no need to type all writings everything on here. Create new ones. :) I love to write my shit at night.When I wake up in the morning I will read it again.Most of the time I hate it.But once in a "Love Is Blue" moon I dig it. Hence this thread. Cheers!I get it. :cheers: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RUSHHEAD666 Posted December 7, 2016 Author Share Posted December 7, 2016 I'm so tied up Leticia.And I do write a lot but I'm not going to put everything I write on here.Geez.Ok... no need to type all writings everything on here. Create new ones. :) I love to write my shit at night.When I wake up in the morning I will read it again.Most of the time I hate it.But once in a "Love Is Blue" moon I dig it. Hence this thread. Cheers!I get it. :cheers: Cheers "L!" 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verena Posted December 7, 2016 Share Posted December 7, 2016 Cheers "L!"You're Neat! I like to motivate your new creations, writing or drumming. Sooner or later inspiration will show up. Releasing the past is good.Hopefully you'll find the way. Signed Live It - Doro Pesch 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RUSHHEAD666 Posted December 10, 2016 Author Share Posted December 10, 2016 Cheers "L!" You're Neat! I like to motivate your new creations, writing or drumming. Sooner or later inspiration will show up. Releasing the past is good.Hopefully you'll find the way. Signed Live It - Doro Pesch DORO ROCKS! So do you! Thanks again for the kind words Leticia! "LET IT ROLL!" Signed, UFO 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OldRUSHfan Posted January 15, 2017 Share Posted January 15, 2017 I like the '68 Instrumental by Paul Mauriat...Your poem is excellent also!http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j223/OldRUSHfan/Banana%20World/Big%20Glasses%20banana.gif 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RUSHHEAD666 Posted February 18, 2017 Author Share Posted February 18, 2017 I like the '68 Instrumental by Paul Mauriat...Your poem is excellent also!http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j223/OldRUSHfan/Banana%20World/Big%20Glasses%20banana.gif Thank you my friend! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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RUSHHEAD666 Posted February 25, 2017 Author Share Posted February 25, 2017 :clap: :clap: :clap: Thanks Baby! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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