JohnRogers Posted February 24, 2019 Share Posted February 24, 2019 My reading list is overwhelmingly non-fiction. Which is great for one writing project but not the other. I'm embarking on a piece of fiction. A coming of age journey, the charcters are mostly about 17-19 years old. Sexual discovery is part of the story. So how do you get real without writing porn? Then there is dialog, young men use some pretty language, especially among themselves. Any guidence would be appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treeduck Posted February 24, 2019 Share Posted February 24, 2019 Just gloss over the sex scenes and concentrate on the cars. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J2112YYZ Posted February 24, 2019 Share Posted February 24, 2019 It's TMI when the participants in said sexual activity are ugly. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnRogers Posted February 24, 2019 Author Share Posted February 24, 2019 Just gloss over the sex scenes and concentrate on the cars.There are plenty of muscle cars in the story, even one that is a complete myth. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treeduck Posted February 24, 2019 Share Posted February 24, 2019 Just gloss over the sex scenes and concentrate on the cars.There are plenty of muscle cars in the story, even one that is a complete myth.You've made one up? What's it called? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grep Posted February 24, 2019 Share Posted February 24, 2019 Just gloss over the sex scenes and concentrate on the lightsabers. Fixed For Episode IX. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Segue Myles Posted February 24, 2019 Share Posted February 24, 2019 It's TMI when the participants in said sexual activity are ugly. "She lifted his bulbous, weighty and protuberant belly like jelly in a colinder, and wet her fingers before finding beneath it...EVEN MORE FUXKING FAT!" 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HemiBeers Posted February 24, 2019 Share Posted February 24, 2019 It's TMI when the participants in said sexual activity are ugly. "She lifted his bulbous, weighty and protuberant belly like jelly in a colinder, and wet her fingers before finding beneath it...EVEN MORE FUXKING FAT!"have you been talking to my wife again? jesus how embarrassing. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Principled Man Posted February 24, 2019 Share Posted February 24, 2019 So how do you get real without writing porn? Focus on the characters' thoughts and feelings, rather than on their physical actions. How they are affected psychologically and emotionally is much more important than what they're doing and how they're doing it. 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Babycat Posted February 24, 2019 Share Posted February 24, 2019 Just gloss over the sex scenes and concentrate on the catnip. Fixed. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treeduck Posted February 24, 2019 Share Posted February 24, 2019 Just gloss over the sex scenes and concentrate on the catnip. Fixed.Old lady in town?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OldRUSHfan Posted February 26, 2019 Share Posted February 26, 2019 Just gloss over the sex scenes and concentrate on the catnip. Fixed.Old lady in town?? You're so CONFUSING sometimes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RUSHHEAD666 Posted February 26, 2019 Share Posted February 26, 2019 It's TMI when the participants in said sexual activity are ugly. "U G L Y you ain't got no alibi, you're just ugly ugly!" Love, FISHBONE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RUSHHEAD666 Posted February 26, 2019 Share Posted February 26, 2019 Just gloss over the sex scenes and concentrate on the catnip. Fixed.Old lady in town?? I think Pat is referencing Pussy Galore. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RUSHHEAD666 Posted February 26, 2019 Share Posted February 26, 2019 Just gloss over the sex scenes and concentrate on the catnip. Fixed. Whoops! LOL! Spayed or neutered? I love Nashville Pussy! Signed, "Pleased To Eat You" 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vaportrailer Posted February 28, 2019 Share Posted February 28, 2019 So how do you get real without writing porn? Focus on the characters' thoughts and feelings, rather than on their physical actions. How they are affected psychologically and emotionally is much more important than what they're doing and how they're doing it. This is good advice. I can only lamely add: Tell the reader what they need to know. Anything more is superfluidfluous.But that's easier said than done. When in doubt, consult the masters: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Babycat Posted February 28, 2019 Share Posted February 28, 2019 Just gloss over the sex scenes and concentrate on the catnip. Fixed. Whoops! LOL! Spayed or neutered? I love Nashville Pussy! Signed, "Pleased To Eat You" :o :LMAO: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treeduck Posted February 28, 2019 Share Posted February 28, 2019 Just gloss over the sex scenes and concentrate on the catnip. Fixed. Whoops! LOL! Spayed or neutered? I love Nashville Pussy! Signed, "Pleased To Eat You" :o :LMAO: I don't get it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Babycat Posted February 28, 2019 Share Posted February 28, 2019 (edited) Just gloss over the sex scenes and concentrate on the catnip. Fixed. Whoops! LOL! Spayed or neutered? I love Nashville Pussy! Signed, "Pleased To Eat You" :o :LMAO: I don't get it!He's asking if I've been spayed or neutered, ducky...! Edited February 28, 2019 by Babycat 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
treeduck Posted February 28, 2019 Share Posted February 28, 2019 Just gloss over the sex scenes and concentrate on the catnip. Fixed. Whoops! LOL! Spayed or neutered? I love Nashville Pussy! Signed, "Pleased To Eat You" :o :LMAO: I don't get it!He's asking if I've been spayed or neutered, ducky...!Oh God and you just got it reversed for Top Cat! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Aubrey Posted July 15, 2019 Share Posted July 15, 2019 Just gloss over the sex scenes and concentrate on the firearms. Fixed. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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